Friday, July 6, 2012

Chapter 4

Yay for writing groups and summer time to write! Chapter 4 is ready, mt bruthas. Well, it's ready for critiquing. I don't like the opening, but the rest? I like it. And that's something these days.


  1. Nice! I still dislike my first chapter, so.

    1. I really hope this shows up. None of my comments are showing on blogger with google, so I'm trying internet explorer.

      We should talk soon. :)

      It's still crap, but it's a better crappy first draft than what I had before. My last week of work is coming up, then we're going to go out of town for a couple of weeks. Well, not solidly back to back weeks, but in and out for a couple of weeks. So, yeah, we should talk soon.


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